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i was a rose
that lost its thorns,
when you chose me
and i blossomed for you
and only you
i opened up my leaves,
and welcomed you
as you plucked me
from the ground
i rested in my vase
waiting to be watered
and you showered me
at first
but then
i began to wilt,
and lost my beauty,
lost my colour,
and you stopped loving me
i tried,
coming back to life
but i was so sick, you see
oh, how you broke me
ripped my petals,
and cut me down
like an unwanted weed
in your perfect garden
i lost my thorns,
once
but i won't make that mistake again
that lost its thorns,
when you chose me
and i blossomed for you
and only you
i opened up my leaves,
and welcomed you
as you plucked me
from the ground
i rested in my vase
waiting to be watered
and you showered me
at first
but then
i began to wilt,
and lost my beauty,
lost my colour,
and you stopped loving me
i tried,
coming back to life
but i was so sick, you see
oh, how you broke me
ripped my petals,
and cut me down
like an unwanted weed
in your perfect garden
i lost my thorns,
once
but i won't make that mistake again
© 2014 - 2024 H-Sayuri
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I love the idea! Comparing yourself when in love to a rose.